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My Promise

Var länge sedan jag postade något på den här sidan men här kommer en text från mig som jag skrev för en herrans massa år sedan…


My Promise

A hundred days, a hundred nights
since darkness covered my shadow
not knowing where I came from, nor where I am going
twigs whipping my tired naked face
by rain washed out of sense, out of courage
by wind blown into fear
demons behind me never summoned
by people never born
what am I hoping for? why am I running?
I might as well stop here and give myself over
better to die than live in fear
other worlds so far away so near
but faith lasts long I guess, as does hope
and since my feet still carries me
I will try to keep my promise
try to give my soul the calmness of the seas
to bring my senses back to peace
the strangest thing is here
the strangest thing is all so clear
my eyes are closed, yet still I see
what will come will come was meant to be
greatest story to be told, greatest light to hold
remember this, remember me
remember all of us have this key

// Staffan

Stjärnskott
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#1

#0: Fantastiskt….gillar rytmen, orden modet och hoppet i dikten

All of us have this key.🤗

 🌸🌼🌸

Livets alla steg
Är mina att ta
🌼🌸🌼

Staffan
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#2

Oj, det var vänliga ord - tack rore! :)

// Staffan

Gråeld
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#3

#0
Tack Staffan för dina ord.

  • Redigerat 2025-04-05 19:50 av Gråeld
snowy00
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#4

#0:

Fint 🙂👍

Soligajag1
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#5

#0:

Denna gillade jag verkligen.
Den gick rakt in i hjärte trakten.
Remember me , remember all of us have this key. 😀♥️
Tack för att du delade med dig av denna vackra novell.

HH 🙂

  • Redigerat 2025-04-08 06:28 av Soligajag1